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More Of You, Less Of Me

Unsa Ahmed

To sense the sensation of your blazing eyes

And to feel the aura of your enthralling smile,

I dampened the sight of my ignite

To which my mind took a flight.


As it is all I want from you with my pleading heart

As you alone make me happy, You alone make me satisfied.


In the backyard of my mind,

I made my way from the place we met years ago

To the erupted volcano of my heart alone

To hear the sweetened sounds of the songs you sang for me

To see the blooming flowers you brought for me

To smell the fragrance of your captivating self

To feel the calming touch of your rough hands.


Oh lord, I missed the glory of your presence in that place

As all I want from you is you.


I convinced myself with hopes over and over again

That Flowers won't be left withered again

Vocals would never be teary again

My heart will start beating again

There will be more of you, less of me again.



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Talha Mudassar
Talha Mudassar
Apr 16, 2023

Such an Emptiness, Feels like I am crawling in a darkness. Screaming for you in a miserable way, don't know how to get out of this darkness which is created by your love full of questions! I can feel the sand which I'm made of, Every part of me feel like Hell like something is burning between my chest. No, it's not my heart, it's your dark world Sleepless nights, thinking how you did this to me raising questions & answers those, all night! I don't feel Myself, still finding Myself First I thought to ask you about lost version of Me Like who am I? But, you separated my soul with my tongue I can't speak, can't sleep, can't believe. I know a lot about you Enough…

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Abdullah Siddiqui
Abdullah Siddiqui
Nov 15, 2022

Words Pouring straight from the heart.. Deep yet astounding Imagination and your references ma’am mind blowing.. 🔥

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ahsanshahlalik6247
Nov 12, 2022

Mam, this one is totaly Mind Blowing 🙌💝

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Salwa Arshed
Salwa Arshed
Nov 08, 2022

Love it😍

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maham.munawar.630
Nov 07, 2022

Everyone must give it a read. 👌

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